2 things that I noticed.
you didn't change the saturation of the bonnet colour so it shows through red, and the weave itself. IT looks like the layouts right its just to big. If you look at the photos hes used the subject is set back a little so that the weave when it is layed over it is finer, i had a similar problem.
I'd try making the weave's overall dimensions smaller, something like 8x4 px or something.